In my previous post I made some comments on the slice-of-life turn that Seirei no Moribito has taken, and how I didn’t think it would last. Well, here we are three episodes later and it’s going as strong as ever. I should be thrilled, but I can’t help but feel a little bit split in my opinion about it at the moment because I think the show is starting to lose focus. Now slice-of-life rarely has that much focus from the beginning but generally speaking there’s always some kind of coherence whether it is a chain of events closely related or something as large as the changing of seasons.

I think Seirei no Moribito has lost most of such coherence, and is starting to become very episodic, plopping us down at random points in time with no clue of what has happened up to that point. I don’t even know how long has passed since Balsa and Chagum moved into their house; it could be weeks or even months for all I know. I’m tempted to say all this is because each side story they tell takes to long i.e. the whole episode showing is very little of what’s going on beside the particular event of the episode but that wouldn’t be the whole truth.

I loved the smithy episode and didn’t even once feel it was dragging but I can’t say the same about the following episode, almost fully dedicated to a gambling game which I felt added very little to the characters or the story. Then came episode 11 and I had to re-evaluate my opinion again, because it was simply awesome. I loved the mystical atmosphere they managed to create in the other world which seemed almost normal except everything was increased in magnitude.

So my point with this is that while I might enjoy a single episode for what it is they need to string the episodes together in a better way if it’s going to leave a lasting impression on me. Hell, even something as simple as relating to how much time has passed since the last episode would be a great improvement and help create the illusion that they are living a peaceful life between the episodes. Despite my minor grievance with this Seirei no Moribito remains one of the shows I look forward to the most each week because I think it has some very interesting and lifelike characters and a great setting and atmosphere.

3 Responses to “Seirei no Moribito - Amazing, but..”

I actually have really liked the slice-of-life episodes, and think they have done a lot to enhance the stories. In fact, I did not find them episodic at all, as they served to piece together the strange world that the characters live in.

For instance, the main thread throughout most of these episodes has been the growth of Chagum. Chagum was kinda useless and sniveling in the getaway episodes, but every episode shows the kind and strong side of him that makes him so beloved. Moreover, his wisdom is very impressive for a child so young. It seems little wonder that he was the choice for the egg.

Speaking of the egg, the Saya episode was a clever way to give us more information about the parallel universe that the Nayugu exist in.

Earlier episodes showed us the strength of other characters like Shuga and Sagum. This shows the very complex and organic plots and alliances that are forming back at the palace.

I feel like these episodes really enrich the world that Serei no Moribito takes place in, and heavily contribute to the story. I realize because the world is so fleshed out and every episode is devoted to just a small part of the story this can be frustrating, but I think it will result in some big payoffs down the line.

I sort of agree with what you’re saying, and I have yet to watch an episode of SnM that I didn’t enjoy. My ever so slight gripe (and I mean really slight) is that I want to know what has happened in between the episodes.

Take the beginning of episode 11 for example. We see Saya lying unconscious without a clue what’s going on. It all gets revealed as the episode goes on, and I don’t really mind this kind of backwards storytelling, but I think they tried to fit too many things into the episode for it to work very well in this case. Just the fact that she is unconscious and her soul has gone wandering off somewhere would be more than enough for this episode in my opinion, but we also find out that she is getting married and because of this Tohya doesn’t want to live all alone in the house they were provided. A house that we haven’t even seen them live together in.

It’s like they’re trying to take away what isn’t there from my perspective, but I think if we had actually seen them live together there I could relate more to his feelings.

I can’t help but think that they’re trying to fit a very epic and engrossing story into too few episodes, and therefore has to compress things a little bit. If it would be a 50 episodes series maybe they would have the time needed to fill in all the gaps that at least I perceive are there.

I agree with most of your points except that Chagum was useless and sniveling in the beginning. He did a lot better than I thought he would as I was expecting him to be a whining pain in the ass, like many escaping royalties seems to be in stories. :) I really do agree that these last couple of episodes have added to the story and characters though, but I just wish that they would have fleshed them out, perhaps even putting them into two episode arcs giving time to tie them together.

In summary: I want more slice of life in between the slice of life!

There are far too many episodes in my opinion, perhaps they could turn this into something even more epic if they were only given thirteen episodes, as pruning often has a higher influence on quality than more material ever will.
For this series, I think that the pacing was pretty near to perfect however. They had to have something happen between summer and spring, and this progression seems very realistic to me. The series shows the progression very well in my opinion, from going to the palace, to an attempt to run away, to living nearby for awhile, to retreating to another village, and to the hunters cave, we see a steady progression from summer, to fall, to winter to spring, and it covers the lives of these characters well during that time, and makes other time passages apparent as well, so it’s not measured in days, but perhaps events, which are how, if you recall, we remember our own lives, as if we were to give a person a story of our lives, and I think it lends it a very genuine atmosphere ;) I am not of the mentality that meticulous story telling is a great thing, then you get something like Robert Jordan, and the Wheel of Time series, where so much is elaborated upon that the story crawls to slumbering and less interesting pace. It is also what I see wrong with 99% of all very long series, outside of the fact that they are heavily patterned. I want to hear of the major interesting events, and how the characters tackled their fears, challenges, and how they overcome their plight, I definitely do not want to hear about Tohya and Saya, and how they live together, and how they cook their meal in the morning, knowing they live together is more than enough for the purpose of the story. I’m not trying to say that those sort of stories don’t have their place, however, this is a more epic tale, the scheme is grander, and so also are the tales told, as is more traditional, in a fantasy tale and setting ;)
In short, I thought it was marvelous. In it’s own way however, it also reminded me of my younger years, and my father, strangely Balsa’s resolve and her way of training remind me of how my father often too, led by example, and how he forced a mentality of self problem solving and sufficiency toward me, and all the scenes of the outdoors reminded me of other things, from those years as well ;)

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